The sea of gods - My journy
This post is another part of the novel am working on (My journey) you can read older posts here:
My journey
To my soul
The forest part 1
The forest part 2
The forest part 3
The sea of Gods part 1
Not to make you confused, those parts are different in time, your ideas might not be so connected, but just to help, "The forest" comes right before "My journey", and this story, "The sea of Gods" comes sometime after "My journey"
The sea of Gods - Part 3
Falling
For how long I have been falling into the darkest night
Angels lost their wings , crying and weeping at humanity's big lose
Deeper and deeper I go and the night is getting darker
The sound of the cry is getting louder and louder
"What have we done"
Humanity is weeping for what they did
They realize their mistake
But they just stood their crying
They always search for a savior, the crying is louder
"Who killed the sun"
I start loosing all connections with every thing around
Nothing but darkness
Even her image started fading from my mind
I can't tell if i am dead or alive, am i still falling?
"What have we done"
The crying is louder than ever, am getting closer
I can no more feel the angels
Laughter .. of the demons echoes in my mind
They enjoyed putting humans in that prison
"Who killed the sun"
There was light, their eyes were shinny
The humans were looking up at the dark sky
Waiting for the sun to shine
Still, they stood there doing nothing but crying
"What have we done"
A human nature, we always wait for a savior
We reach a level where we lose hope and cry
Waiting for something from the sky
We never search for an exit
"Who killed the sun"
We never question our mistakes
We just blame each other
And when ever we have a chance to change
We just enjoy screwing it and be proud of that
"What have we done"
And when we realize our mistakes again
We wait for a savior ...
A savior that always had been a human
A savior that WE always had created
"Who killed the sun"
We killed the sun, and we can make it shine again
We can change
We need the change to become our own saviors
We can't keep waiting for the unknown
"What have we done"
...
I hit the ground, there were no humans
I woke up on the boat alone
In the sea of gods, looking at the shores of the desert of kings again
I went no where.
End of the sea of gods part 3
to be continued
My journey
To my soul
The forest part 1
The forest part 2
The forest part 3
The sea of Gods part 1
Not to make you confused, those parts are different in time, your ideas might not be so connected, but just to help, "The forest" comes right before "My journey", and this story, "The sea of Gods" comes sometime after "My journey"
The sea of Gods - Part 3
Falling
For how long I have been falling into the darkest night
Angels lost their wings , crying and weeping at humanity's big lose
Deeper and deeper I go and the night is getting darker
The sound of the cry is getting louder and louder
"What have we done"
Humanity is weeping for what they did
They realize their mistake
But they just stood their crying
They always search for a savior, the crying is louder
"Who killed the sun"
I start loosing all connections with every thing around
Nothing but darkness
Even her image started fading from my mind
I can't tell if i am dead or alive, am i still falling?
"What have we done"
The crying is louder than ever, am getting closer
I can no more feel the angels
Laughter .. of the demons echoes in my mind
They enjoyed putting humans in that prison
"Who killed the sun"
There was light, their eyes were shinny
The humans were looking up at the dark sky
Waiting for the sun to shine
Still, they stood there doing nothing but crying
"What have we done"
A human nature, we always wait for a savior
We reach a level where we lose hope and cry
Waiting for something from the sky
We never search for an exit
"Who killed the sun"
We never question our mistakes
We just blame each other
And when ever we have a chance to change
We just enjoy screwing it and be proud of that
"What have we done"
And when we realize our mistakes again
We wait for a savior ...
A savior that always had been a human
A savior that WE always had created
"Who killed the sun"
We killed the sun, and we can make it shine again
We can change
We need the change to become our own saviors
We can't keep waiting for the unknown
"What have we done"
...
I hit the ground, there were no humans
I woke up on the boat alone
In the sea of gods, looking at the shores of the desert of kings again
I went no where.
End of the sea of gods part 3
to be continued
4 Comments:
i do need to catch up on those elder posts parts :S
By Mizo, At December 20, 2008 at 11:47 PM
lol, don't worry , you have time :P .. the post rate is sooo slow
By deadman walking, At December 20, 2008 at 11:51 PM
deep thoughts :D
and true
-- moush moujemaleh
By Anonymous, At December 27, 2008 at 1:58 AM
hehe, thanks lady :D ,
since you like it, i really need criticism ... how do you think i can improve my writing skills ? any suggestions , comments ?
By deadman walking, At December 27, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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